сам текст. может какие предложения или ошибки? заранее спасибо
Dear Mr. Robinson,
your job advertisement in Time Online from 04 April 2011 has aroused my interest. I would like to meet the challenge as a legal research assistant. My skills and abilities fulfils your desired profile of requirements and also opened me more career opportunities.
My excellences are to advice the customers friendly and competent. I also stay professionally and objective in difficult situations. Due to my high apprehension and willingness to learn, I am able to incorporate me quickly into new business areas and work within autonomously and independently in a short time.
Because of my current studies in environmental and business law and my previous experience I would be the perfect candidate for this job. I would be very pleased to receive an invitation to attend an interview.
Sincerely yours,

"Your job advertisement in Time Online from 04 April 2011 has aroused my interest. I would like to meet the challenge as a legal research assistant. My skills and abilities fulfils your desired profile of requirements and also opened me more career opportunities."
My skills and abilities FULFILL без s на конце и я не поняла что вам открыло новые возможности?
"I am able to incorporate me quickly"
I am able to incorporate MYSELF quickly
"I also stay professionally and objective in difficult situations"
Also, I remain? PROFESSIONAL and objective in difficult situations.
"Because of my current studies in environmental and business law and my previous experience I would be the perfect candidate for this job. I would be very pleased to receive an invitation to attend an interview."
я бы сказала Based on my current studies in environmental and business law and my previous experience I AM the perfect candidate for this job.
и в конце просто Sincerely имя фамилия

спасибо!

Это не резюме, это называется covering letter на британском и cover letter на мириканьском английском. Кстати по этим словосочетаниям в гугле тонны образцов.
Dear Mr. Robinson,
Your job advertisement in Time Online from 04 April 2011 has aroused my interest. I would like to meet the challenge as a legal research assistant (was there something about the challenge in the ad? Maybe just "I am very interested in the position of the legal research assistant"?). My skills and abilities match the profile of requirements listed in the advertisement. Needless to say, I am convinced that the position would open for me more exciting career opportunities later on.
My excellences are to advice the customers friendly and competent.
Ничего не поняла. Что ты этим хотела сказать?
I always stay professional and objective in difficult situations. Due to my enthusiasm and high motivation to learn new skills, I am able to quickly adapt to new business areas and start working within them autonomously and independently in a short time.
Due to my current studies in environmental and business law and my previous experience I think I would be the perfect candidate for this job. I would be very pleased to receive an invitation to attend an interview.
Sincerely yours,
А насчет предыдущего опыта в объявлении ничего не было? Имхо надо написать, как и где ты себя уже проявила.

карелка, спасибо большое. это у меня подруга учится, ей задание дали.. она написала и мне для проверки прислала.. а коллективный разум как всегда лучше.. правда, сама она почему-то к помощи интеренета обращаться не хочет..

Если Вы желаете , чтобы текст Ваш откорректировали, пришлите русский оригинал текста, надо точно знать , что Вы хотели выразить составляя такоей текст

Если просто упражнение по английскому, то пойдет, но английский, сорри, средний очень. Ну а если по жизни, такое cover letter идет в корзину сразу и CV даже не открывается. Это, увы, не понты, а реалии жизни. "Индийски стиль", а уж если письмо начать с Dear Sir, то будет вообще Болливуд
Дело даже не в стиле и не чехарде с артиклями (и хрен с ними, хотя если чел идет на legal advisor... well..). Проблема в том, что в тексте отсутствует содержание. Если ситуация такая что и так можетпрокатит, все букеты можно тупо выкинуть и оставить одну фразу in response to your job advert in... here I am applying.... please find CV enclosed / attached...Sincerely...